What readers said after reading The Trucker's Daughter
I enjoyed your piece
immensely. You did a wonderful job with your imagery, keeping me
interested the entire time. I also liked the whole history of your
family, and you did a great job describing it.
The ending was probably the only rough spot for me. It felt a little rushed, and I actually felt like I wanted to read more!
Great read. Thank you so much for sharing this.
Take good care...
Treacle
I like this. I can imagine the life in France and how things were. It is very detailed and complete. It makes me want to read more. Good job.
Kissesme
Well, I just wanted to tell you that, memoir or not, this is a great anecdote. We get to know you so well through your writings. Have you tried to submit this piece to other magazines online? I hope so. This is a touching tribute to the author's hard-working father.
Delana Romaine
I found this to be quite interesting. I found no typos or misspelled words and you certainly had my attention from the beginning to the end of the story.
I'd love to read some of your father's truck driving stories. As he tells them, you should write them down and ask his permission to share with your writing.com family.
Keep writing.
Grandma Penny
It seems like you've lived a very interesting life so far! I can imagine how hard it must have been growing up in the family of a truck driver. I bet you must have lost just as much sleep worrying over your father as he did driving. I can imagine the sheer fascination your father's truck must have held for you as a child too. Something so big must have been like your own private playground to explore.
This was a touching peep into your life. I think it would have been neat growing up in France. I've never been there but it's on the top of my list of places I'd like to visit someday. Thanks for giving me a small glimpse into that other world.
This was very well-written. No typos that I noticed and your use of language was excellent. You effectively pulled me into a page of your life and kept my mind involved so it wouldn't wander in boredom. That's the hardest thing to do with biographical pieces IMO. Very well done here though. Nice job
Pmanljay
I liked this little bio. I have driven trucks for 25 years and to read about such a life in a different country was very interesting. Here I pass a thousand drivers a day and I doubt any of them (including me) can even imagine the friends and relationships you decribed here. Thank you for the great read! I only wish it was longer.
Reason
Wow! I liked the conclusion. Your story was told in a nice and heartwarming manner. Two-thumbs up!
In a nutshell, this piece is A-awesome!
K'neto
The ending was probably the only rough spot for me. It felt a little rushed, and I actually felt like I wanted to read more!
Great read. Thank you so much for sharing this.
Take good care...
Treacle
I like this. I can imagine the life in France and how things were. It is very detailed and complete. It makes me want to read more. Good job.
Kissesme
Well, I just wanted to tell you that, memoir or not, this is a great anecdote. We get to know you so well through your writings. Have you tried to submit this piece to other magazines online? I hope so. This is a touching tribute to the author's hard-working father.
Delana Romaine
I found this to be quite interesting. I found no typos or misspelled words and you certainly had my attention from the beginning to the end of the story.
I'd love to read some of your father's truck driving stories. As he tells them, you should write them down and ask his permission to share with your writing.com family.
Keep writing.
Grandma Penny
It seems like you've lived a very interesting life so far! I can imagine how hard it must have been growing up in the family of a truck driver. I bet you must have lost just as much sleep worrying over your father as he did driving. I can imagine the sheer fascination your father's truck must have held for you as a child too. Something so big must have been like your own private playground to explore.
This was a touching peep into your life. I think it would have been neat growing up in France. I've never been there but it's on the top of my list of places I'd like to visit someday. Thanks for giving me a small glimpse into that other world.
This was very well-written. No typos that I noticed and your use of language was excellent. You effectively pulled me into a page of your life and kept my mind involved so it wouldn't wander in boredom. That's the hardest thing to do with biographical pieces IMO. Very well done here though. Nice job
Pmanljay
I liked this little bio. I have driven trucks for 25 years and to read about such a life in a different country was very interesting. Here I pass a thousand drivers a day and I doubt any of them (including me) can even imagine the friends and relationships you decribed here. Thank you for the great read! I only wish it was longer.
Reason
Wow! I liked the conclusion. Your story was told in a nice and heartwarming manner. Two-thumbs up!
In a nutshell, this piece is A-awesome!
K'neto